{"id":169,"date":"2008-02-07T19:44:24","date_gmt":"2008-02-07T23:44:24","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/blog.timcurran.com\/?p=169"},"modified":"2008-02-07T21:52:29","modified_gmt":"2008-02-08T01:52:29","slug":"dont-quote-using-quote","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/timcurran.com\/blog\/2008\/02\/07\/dont-quote-using-quote\/","title":{"rendered":"Don&#8217;t quote using &#8220;quote&#8221;"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Our policy here at <a href=\"http:\/\/www.siriusoutq.com\" data-versionurl=\"https:\/\/timcurran.com\/blog\/amber\/cache\/434eb078e7f58f31f571da81d1573f12\/\" data-versiondate=\"2026-01-09T16:43:50+00:00\" data-amber-behavior=\"\" title=\"Sirius OutQ\" target=\"_blank\">Sirius OutQ<\/a> News is to signal a verbatim quote by using the word &#8216;quote&#8217; only as an absolute last resort. It&#8217;s a mutation of the old newspaper reporter&#8217;s practice of barking copy, punctuation and all, down the phone line to the rewrite desk. It&#8217;s therefore corny and print-y; it impedes listener comprehension; and it&#8217;s miles from the conversational style we&#8217;re trying to achieve. Don&#8217;t do it.<\/p>\n<p>There are several good alternatives to the word &#8216;quote.&#8217; In most cases, you can just do without it. Instead, signal the quote through a tiny pause and change to a slightly higher, more stressed intonation. That&#8217;s usually all an audience needs to know it&#8217;s an exact quote. And this can work &#8212; in fact, works better &#8212; even when the quote contains a reference to &#8216;I&#8217; or &#8216;me.&#8217;<\/p>\n<p>However, in some cases, your quote will contain something controversial that you&#8217;ll want to ensure the audience doesn&#8217;t mistake for coming from your newsreader&#8217;s lips. In that case, use a verbal flag such as &#8220;in his words,&#8221; or &#8220;she described as.&#8221; Here&#8217;s an example from one of this week&#8217;s newscasts:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p> Transcripts of an audio recording submitted as evidence show Cuadra telling  Corrigan the murder &#8211; in his words &#8211; &#8220;made me feel better inside.&#8221;<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>The more vivid the quote, the stronger your signal should be that it is an exact quote:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>Jones&#8217;s exact words were &#8220;You&#8217;ll never get me, copper.&#8221;<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Only in the most searingly hot-button of cases should it be necessary to go beyond these devices and actually use the Q-word. Even then, you should try to think of the way you might put it in conversation. For example:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>After the jury was dismissed, Smith leaned over to his lawyer and said within earshot of reporters &#8212; quoting now &#8212; &#8220;I did kill her.&#8221;<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>And that really should be your touchstone when handling most style questions like this. Just ask yourself, &#8220;How might I express this in conversation?&#8221; It won&#8217;t be the right answer <em>every <\/em>time, but it will be right most of the time.<\/p>\n<blockquote><\/blockquote>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Our policy here at Sirius OutQ News is to signal a verbatim quote by using the word &#8216;quote&#8217; only as an absolute last resort. It&#8217;s a mutation of the old newspaper reporter&#8217;s practice of barking copy, punctuation and all, down the phone line to the rewrite desk. It&#8217;s therefore corny and print-y; it impedes listener comprehension; and it&#8217;s miles from the conversational style we&#8217;re trying to achieve. Don&#8217;t do it. There are several good alternatives to the word &#8216;quote.&#8217; In most cases, you can just do without it. Instead, signal the quote through a tiny pause and change to a slightly higher, more stressed intonation. That&#8217;s usually all an audience needs to know it&#8217;s an exact quote. And this can work &#8212; in fact, works better &#8212; even when the quote contains a reference to &#8216;I&#8217; or &#8216;me.&#8217; However, in some cases, your quote will contain something controversial that you&#8217;ll want to ensure the audience doesn&#8217;t mistake for coming from your newsreader&#8217;s lips. In that case, use a verbal flag such as &#8220;in his words,&#8221; or &#8220;she described as.&#8221; Here&#8217;s an example from one of this week&#8217;s newscasts: Transcripts of an audio recording submitted as evidence show Cuadra telling Corrigan the murder &#8211; in his words &#8211; &#8220;made me feel better inside.&#8221; The more vivid the quote, the stronger your signal should be that it is an exact quote: Jones&#8217;s exact words were &#8220;You&#8217;ll never get me, copper.&#8221; Only in the most searingly hot-button of cases should it be necessary to go beyond these devices and actually use the Q-word. Even then, you should try to think of the way you might put it in conversation. For example: After the jury was dismissed, Smith leaned over to his lawyer and said within earshot of reporters &#8212; quoting now &#8212; &#8220;I&#8230; <\/p>\n<p><a class=\"readmore\" href=\"https:\/\/timcurran.com\/blog\/2008\/02\/07\/dont-quote-using-quote\/\">Continue Reading<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":274,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_uag_custom_page_level_css":"","_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":false,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2},"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false},"categories":[10,11],"tags":[16],"class_list":["post-169","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-journalism","category-newswriting","tag-quotes"],"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","uagb_featured_image_src":{"full":false,"thumbnail":false,"medium":false,"medium_large":false,"large":false,"1536x1536":false,"2048x2048":false},"uagb_author_info":{"display_name":"Tim Curran","author_link":"https:\/\/timcurran.com\/blog\/author\/timcurran-admin\/"},"uagb_comment_info":3,"uagb_excerpt":"Our policy here at Sirius OutQ News is to signal a verbatim quote by using the word &#8216;quote&#8217; only as an absolute last resort. 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